My First Dodger Game
The most special day was going to my first Dodger game with my friend Danielle and her Dad. I went to her house and waited 2 hours before we left to the Dodger game. We left her house and was heading to the Dodger game I was so excited.We got there and I was amazed we got our seats and watched them practice. We got are snacks before everyone came because it well be packed so I got a dodger dog and Danielle got a hamburger. The game started I was so happy to watch the dodgers. They started playing they were against Miami. Danielle and I were cheering for them dodgers. The new player Adrian Gonzales made a home run. Everybody was cheering for Adrian. Adrian did really well on his hits .Dodgers were winning Miami was losing. It was cool we had a nice breeze and a little bit of sun. I was really happy with my friend Danielle,we were having a great time. We got thirsty so we got something drink. Some guy through a ball and it went all around the stadium It went all next to us and everyone wanted to through it down,some kid through it and it was about to fall and everybody was like no and some guy caught it and everyone was so happy. The game was really good the Dodgers were winning and Miami was losing. Danielle and I were calling for Cruz because he made home runs. The game was about to end and the Dodgers were winning it was the last ending. We were going to leave early because we didn't want to get traffic so when we were leaving we forgot where was are car . When we went outside the stadium we were looking for our car but we ' see where was it. Danielle and I were laughing so much because we thought it was funny that we didn't know where the car was. Mr.Duran was laughing to. But then we found it. We grove to Danielle's house and we watched movies like The Hunger Games it was really good I had a great time with her. My mom gave me a call and told me to go outside cause she was there I was sad to leave cause I had so fun but I told Danielle bye and thank you! |
Sophia's Metacognition
Sophia Mendoza
4/22/13 This sample of my work shows my ability to write my stories in an interesting and creative way. It also shows who my characters are and what they are like. The steps That I took to produce this work were to first make maps of my writing of the settings and characters. I made sure that I made The settings clear and who are the characters in the story. After that I wrote my draft of the story. The next step was to underline who was there and the settings. Later I wrote In the computer from my draft and finally I finished my story. I think that this piece illustrates my ability to show more about myself and how I had fun at the dodger game especially good. This is because I wrote my feeling and what did we do and what was going on well we were at the dodger game. If I had more tie to work on this project, I would have more details about the game and more things of what we talked about and what we did and how was our night together. I probably could use a little more practice or help in the following areas: 1)Writing my first paragraph more intresting and in more detail. 2)Make it a little bit more shorter and more intresting on the characters and place. 3)To make the place intresting |